remote: Improve some comments (#12102)

Improve some comments in storage/remote/queue_manager.go, wrt. general
language and a typo.

Signed-off-by: Arve Knudsen <arve.knudsen@gmail.com>

storage/remote/queue_manager.go

@@ -454,7 +454,7 @@ func NewQueueManager(
 		logger = log.NewNopLogger()
 	}
 
-	// Copy externalLabels into slice which we need for processExternalLabels.
+	// Copy externalLabels into a slice, which we need for processExternalLabels.
 	extLabelsSlice := make([]labels.Label, 0, externalLabels.Len())
 	externalLabels.Range(func(l labels.Label) {
 		extLabelsSlice = append(extLabelsSlice, l)
@@ -499,7 +499,7 @@ func NewQueueManager(
 	return t
 }
 
-// AppendMetadata sends metadata the remote storage. Metadata is sent in batches, but is not parallelized.
+// AppendMetadata sends metadata to the remote storage. Metadata is sent in batches, but is not parallelized.
 func (t *QueueManager) AppendMetadata(ctx context.Context, metadata []scrape.MetricMetadata) {
 	mm := make([]prompb.MetricMetadata, 0, len(metadata))
 	for _, entry := range metadata {
@@ -944,7 +944,7 @@ func (t *QueueManager) updateShardsLoop() {
 	}
 }
 
-// shouldReshard returns if resharding should occur
+// shouldReshard returns whether resharding should occur.
 func (t *QueueManager) shouldReshard(desiredShards int) bool {
 	if desiredShards == t.numShards {
 		return false
@@ -1471,7 +1471,7 @@ func (s *shards) sendSamples(ctx context.Context, samples []prompb.TimeSeries, s
 	s.qm.dataOut.incr(int64(len(samples)))
 	s.qm.dataOutDuration.incr(int64(time.Since(begin)))
 	s.qm.lastSendTimestamp.Store(time.Now().Unix())
-	// Pending samples/exemplars/histograms also should be subtracted as an error means
+	// Pending samples/exemplars/histograms also should be subtracted, as an error means
 	// they will not be retried.
 	s.qm.metrics.pendingSamples.Sub(float64(sampleCount))
 	s.qm.metrics.pendingExemplars.Sub(float64(exemplarCount))