From 5aa0ef4fe800099af0decee60506f613c26407a7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: kfishner <kevinfishner@Kevins-MacBook-Pro.local>
Date: Thu, 21 Jun 2018 18:06:26 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] homepage copy edits

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 website/source/index.html.erb | 14 +++++++-------
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/website/source/index.html.erb b/website/source/index.html.erb
index b9e03845a6..08ebd9a643 100644
--- a/website/source/index.html.erb
+++ b/website/source/index.html.erb
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ description: |-
               <span>New</span> Consul 1.0 release. Get the details <svg xmlns='http://www.w3.org/2000/svg' width='6' height='10' viewBox='0 0 6 10'><path fill='#650D34' d='M1.138.529a.666.666 0 1 0-.942.943L3.724 5 .195 8.53a.666.666 0 1 0 .943.943l4-4a.666.666 0 0 0 0-.943l-4-4z'/></svg>
             </a>
             <h1>Service Mesh Made Easy</h1>
-            <p>Connect, configure, and secure services in dynamic infrastructure.</p>
+            <p>Distributed service networking layer to connect, secure, and configure services across any runtime platform and public or private cloud</p>
             <a href='#' class='g-btn download'>
               <svg xmlns='http://www.w3.org/2000/svg' width='20' height='22' viewBox='0 0 20 22'>
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@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@ description: |-
   <section id='static-dynamic' class='g-section bg-light'>
     <div class='g-container'>
       <div class='intro'>
-        <h2>A paradigm shift</h2>
+        <h2>Service-based networking for dynamic infrastructure</h2>
         <p>The shift from static to dynamic infrastructure creates a challenge for connectivity and security. Consul is the service-based networking solution to connect, configure, and secure services in dynamic infrastructure.</p>
       </div>
       <div class='g-timeline'>
@@ -84,13 +84,13 @@ description: |-
           </span>
           <span class='dot'></span>
           <h3>Static</h3>
-          <span class='sub-heading'>Host-based networking.</span>
+          <span class='sub-heading'>Host-based networking</span>
           <img src='/assets/images/consul-connect/svgs/static.svg' alt='static, host-based networking' class='static-callout' />
         </div>
         <div>
           <span class='dot'></span>
           <h3>Dynamic</h3>
-          <span class='sub-heading'>Service-based networking.</span>
+          <span class='sub-heading'>Service-based networking</span>
           <div id='index-dynamic-animation'>
             <%= inline_svg 'consul-connect/svgs/dynamic.svg' %>
           </div>
@@ -129,7 +129,7 @@ description: |-
           <div>
             <img src='/assets/images/consul-connect/svgs/configuration-simple.svg'>
             <h3>Service Configuration <span>for runtime configuration</h3>
-            <p>Feature rich Key/Value store lets you easily configure services.</p>
+            <p>Feature rich Key/Value store to easily configure services.</p>
           </div>
           <div>
             <a href='#' class='g-btn dark-outline'>Learn more</a>
@@ -142,7 +142,7 @@ description: |-
   <section class='g-section bg-light border-top'>
     <div class='g-container'>
       <div class='intro'>
-        <h2>Principles of Consul</h2>
+        <h2>Consul Principles</h2>
       </div>
       <div class='g-text-asset'>
         <div>
@@ -211,7 +211,7 @@ description: |-
   <section class='g-section'>
     <div class='g-container'>
       <div class='intro'>
-        <h3>Join millions of companies that trust Consul.</h3>
+        <h3>Companies that trust Consul</h3>
       </div>
       <div class='g-logo-grid'>
         <div>